Last summer...

This picture was taken the last summer. It was a selfie and my friend Estefi took it. The most likely of this picture is the place, the company and the laughs.



In the summer before entering university, a friend text me for whatsapp and I wonder if I wanted to go to the beach with a group of friends that I knew, and obviusly say yes!. We went to "Papudo" for four days and it was amazing.


The picture, if I remember correctly, was the second day and that night we were decided wen to the beach. We listen to music, we dance and we drink (We only drink juice obviously!)And finally we returned to the apartment 3 am.

I love this image because we are in my favorite place, wich is the beach. We are sitting on the sand and enjoy the sound of the sea. The company is very important because I'm with good friends and We understand really good. Finally the laughs and the conversations it was the best parts of that summer, because we never stopped the laughs.

In conclusion this picture it represents one of my bets summer, because I´m with my friends and I have only good memories about these days. Definitely I hope the next summer be as entertaining as the photo.


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  1. Unknown15 de mayo de 2017 a las 15:44

    The best summers are those that mix friends and beach :)

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  2. Unknown15 de mayo de 2017 a las 16:00

    All of you look very happy in this photo! It is obviuos that you were having a great time in the beach! Those trips with friends are the best.

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  3. Anónimo15 de mayo de 2017 a las 18:13

    I don't believe that you only drink juice that night, you have a weird funny face in this picture, it´s extremely suspicious! jeje

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  4. javiera jara 15 de mayo de 2017 a las 20:26

    there's nothing better than been on a beautiful place with people you love...

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  5. Martín Ovalle15 de mayo de 2017 a las 22:13

    I went to Papudo once, and is one of the most beautiful beaches I have ever seen.

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  6. Anónimo17 de mayo de 2017 a las 21:27

    juice jajajajaj really? those special memories remain in the memory for life

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  7. Prof. Masías2 de julio de 2017 a las 0:14

    corrections:
    "The most likely of this picture"= likable
    "In the summer before"= the summer before
    "we were decided wen"= decided to go
    "We listen to music, we dance and we drink (We only drink juice obviously!)"= We listened to" "music, we danced and we drank (We only drank juice obviously!)
    "and enjoy the sound" = enjoying
    "conversations it was the best parts"= were
    "this picture it represents one of my bets"= this picture represents one of my best.

    Feedback:
    Good text with several mino mistakes qhich do not strongly affect message coming through. In terms of cohesion the text must checked though, especially in the way you conjugate the verbs.

    6,5 pts.= 5.0

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